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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>In the sentence “</span>Because there was not an agreed
upon security model at the time the document was developed, the profile
includes username/token and X.509 token credential profiles from WS-I for
authentication”, I strongly request that the intro clause be dropped (“Because
there was not an agreed upon security model at the time the document was
developed,”). <span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>This intro clause at worst is not true and at best is misleading.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>I remember making this request before, but my request must have
been lost somewhere<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Also, get rid of the “Marty” row in table 1<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Marty<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
ogsa-wg-bounces@ogf.org [mailto:ogsa-wg-bounces@ogf.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Andrew
Grimshaw<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, March 06, 2008 3:07 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> ogsa-wg@ogf.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [ogsa-wg] Penultimate draft<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>I
have cut the primer down by half so that we can send it off to IEEE. It is now
under 6,000 words. Needless to say a lot of text got axed. I apologize if your
favorite is gone. If something must be put back in, then please tell me where
else to cut. We are allowed 12 references. We had over thrity. There are many
more things referred to in the paper. Currently we have six references. We can
add six more. By the way, none of the specs have citations … there are
too many. Instead I point the reader at the ogf page. If you care to give me
the six citations you feel we absolutely must have, and where they should go.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>The
current set is:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'>1.
Foster, I., Kesselman, C., Nick, J. and Tuecke, S., The Physiology of the Grid:
An Open Grid Services Architecture for Distributed Systems Integration. in,
(2002).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'>2.
Hunt, G. and Brubacher, D., Detours: Binary interception of Win32 functions. in
<i>Proceedings of the 3rd USENIX Windows NT Symposium</i>, (Seattle, 1999),
135-143.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'>3.
Morgan, M. and Grimshaw, A., Genesis II - Standards Based Grid Computing. in <i>Seventh
IEEE International Symposium on Cluster Computing and the Grid</i>, (Rio de
Janario, Brazil, 2007), IEEE Computer Society, 611-618.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'>4.
Myers, D.S. and Bazinet, A.L. Intercepting Arbitrary Functions on Windows,
UNIX, and Macintosh OS X Platforms, University of Maryland, 2004.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'>5.
Thain, D., Tannenbaum, T. and Livny, M. Condor and the Grid. in Berman, F.,
Hey, A.J.G. and Fox, G. eds. <i>Grid Computing: Making The Global
Infrastructure a Reality</i>, John Wiley, 2003, 299-332.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'>6.
White, B., Walker, M., Humphrey, M. and Grimshaw, A., LegionFS: A Secure and Scalable
File System Supporting Cross-Domain High-Performance Applications. in <i>SC 01</i>,
(Denver, CO, 2001).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.5in'><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Comments
are welcome until Monday. Then away it goes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>A<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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