[ogsa-naming-wg] Updated draft document
behrens at r2ad.com
Thu Aug 25 22:30:43 CDT 2005
I review it and have a few minor comments:
1) I was expecting the introduction to contain more detailed information
about the purpose of the specification, expanding upon the abstract.
Currently it covers the rational behind creating a profile using
ws-addressing, which is important too. Perhaps some text from the
original white paper might help? I'd be happy to send in a suggested
addition to the intro, if warranted.
2) section 2 - replace URI with IRI, and "Uniform" with "Internationalized".
3) Figure 1 is currently a Heading style which messes up the table of
Andrew Grimshaw wrote:
> I have updated the draft document to incorporate the comments from the
> F2F. The most significant change is that the resolve portype that
> takes an optional EPR. The EPR no longer MUST contain an AbstractName
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